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Eric, 78 y.o.

Netherlands

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" EXPLAIN "

!! EXPLAIN !! LOVE is not complaining It is YOU who will suffer We all want just some explaining But life only feels more tougher So , what will be your next step Your emotions just won't know Can I be freed from this trap ? It's my reward for making a vow Remember back when you were young Life was easy - come what may You were smart and did nothing wrong But growing up has a price to pay We all have this special dream Of a happiness so pure But life played a tricky scheme Now you're heartbroken and unsure Can a broken heart be mend ? Are YOU looking for more clues ? No TRUE LOVE from heaven send Where is that right person for you to choose ? If we ALL could re-live life We would know OUR past mistakes But what a pity , in human life There is no option for re-makes Am I asking now too much ? What's inside YOUR deepest mind Do YOU still feel that sweet touch Of the LOVE(R) YOU left behind ? But sometimes , there is a HERO Living inside a memory When HIS/HER life , was at a BOTTOM low HE/SHE turned a DREAM into REALITY ?? EX - PAIN ?? Eric c December 2016 It takes hard work and dedication to keep a Happy relation. And when YOU don't , there may come a day , that YOU will ask (me) this question : ! EXPLAIN !


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Ben


Good work! Did you write the poem yourself?

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Eric, 78 y.o.

Netherlands

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Thanks.Well I did put (C) at the end. Yes , it's my own creation

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Elena, 56 y.o.

Ukraine

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красиво😍

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Eric, 78 y.o.

Netherlands

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Elena thank you ... In Odessa I like the Opera Theatre building (it's monumental)

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